While trying to decide on a topic for today's blog, I was
torn between a writing type topic or a more general area of discussion. Since last week's blog was a writing topic, I
decided to continue along those lines.
A couple of days ago I was watching on old movie, the 1974 film
of Agatha Christie's Murder On The Orient
Express with its all star cast where almost everyone in the movie seemed to
be a major character. It occurred to me
that there were very few characters in the movie other than the many primary
ones (the original book had more characters than the film including some I'd
consider secondary). So I started
thinking about secondary characters and how they can be used to prod, shove and
push the main characters into and along the necessary path for the story line.
So, let's talk a bit about secondary characters.
When I say secondary characters, I'm not referring to the minor
characters that decorate a scene and maybe have a couple of lines of
dialogue. I'm talking about the
characters who have a prominent place in your story but are not your main
characters. These are the characters you
can use to maneuver your main characters into and along the path toward
achieving the story goal. They are a key
factor in moving your story forward and determining what direction it takes.
In developing these characters you need to decide what you
want them to accomplish and how you want them to relate to and interact with
your main characters in addition to each other in order to move your story line
toward its conclusion. Let's take a look
at how a set of secondary characters can be used to move a story line in a
specific direction. Remember, it's not so
much who they are, it's what they do and how they relate to the main characters
and how the main characters respond to them.
Example: You have a
story about a teenager who is the leader of a gang that has been stealing cars
for some mobsters. You have two ways you
can go with your main character, in other words, two directions your story line
can take and you must choose one of them.
#1: he wants to leave the gang and make something of his life OR #2: he
runs his gang with a iron hand and threatens anyone who wants out.
With scenario #1 your secondary characters who will
influence the story line might be his girl friend, his little brother, and one
of his teachers at school. That tells
you their connection to your main character, but it does not tell you how they
move the story. His girl friend fears
for his safety and finally gives him the ultimatum of leave the gang or she's
leaving him. His little brother idolizes
him and wants to be just like him, but he doesn't want his little brother to
make the same mistakes he did. His
teacher is mentoring him by helping him with his studies and finding him an
after school job.
With scenario #2 your secondary characters can be his girl
friend, a rival gang leader, and the mobster who pays him for the stolen
cars. Again, that tells you how they
connect to your main character but not what they do to move the story in a
specific direction. His girl friend
demands more and more in the way of material things so he needs the money from
stealing cars to keep her happy. The
rival gang leader is trying to take over his stolen car business so he has to
watch his back at all time to protect himself and his own interests. The mobster gives him access to the easy
money he needs to keep his girl friend happy and the promise of being able to
move into their organization and advance in the criminal world.
With each scenario, the gang leader has a girl friend but
her function is different in the two scenarios so that the character helps move
the two story lines in two different directions.
One of the great things about secondary characters is that
you can make them as outrageous, unconventional and over-the-top as you
want. You don't have the same parameters
and cautions with secondary characters as you do with your main
characters. The main thing you need to
be careful with in creating your secondary character is to not make them more
interesting than your main characters so that they don't steal the show and shove
your main characters into the background.
A good example of secondary characters being over the top
was the television situation comedy of several years ago, Will and Grace. The
secondary characters of Karen and Jack were totally outrageous while the main
characters of Will and Grace were more grounded.
Any comments about developing and using secondary characters
in your writing? Or any television
shows, movies, or books where the secondary characters stood out in your mind
with the way they were able to guide and manipulate the story line?
2 comments:
Excellent post and information about secondary characters. Well done! Thanks!
Ashantay: I've always found secondary characters an interesting subject. Of course, in shorter stories (novellas and short stories) you don't always need/have room for much in the way of actual secondaries as opposed to minor characters. But when you have enough length in your story, they're real interesting to work with.
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